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- Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:23 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: yes umm
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3132
Re: yes umm
This uncannily fit my life in the past few days.,...what a trip...not the way you meant but it certainly feels like whooah....noone could possibly know all that is happening to me....good write..... oH it's like the poem is written to me and they are wrong but it is uncanny....and not knowing who in...
- Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:12 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: While I was skipping rocks.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2887
Re: While I was skipping rocks.
the teenage heart isn't afraid of that first relationship before the first heartbreak.....but heartbreak is not eminent....the older I got, the harder it was to get close to someone.....as a teenager, a romantic relationship is new territory never explored....never loved and lost....etc Oh I forgot,...
- Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:07 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Avarice
- Replies: 12
- Views: 8062
Re: Avarice
I was sick of the word maggots by the end but was a cool poem....was it a kind of synical look at "he with the most toys wins"?
- Fri Nov 23, 2007 1:42 pm
- Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
- Topic: **I found my God in her...** Poem of the Week: 12.11.05
- Replies: 33
- Views: 15380
Re: **I found my God in her...** Poem of the Week: 12.11.05
I found God before I found my mothers wonderful beauty......but seeing the beauty in my mother and her love for me and her intentions in raising me have brought me intimately closer to God....she and I were verbally abusive with each other up until the day she died....It was God that brought to my a...
- Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:19 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Sacredly Profane Love
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3341
Re: Sacredly Profane Love
Yes there is a difference between the two....a very good message.....I don't like critiquing but one thing that hit me as I read it was that the actual word 'lust' was maybe overused but that might have been the effect you wanted not sure....I like that bible verse about love (patient and kind....et...
- Sun Jul 22, 2007 6:37 pm
- Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
- Topic: Master Peace
- Replies: 12
- Views: 15716
- Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:27 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: A Sorrow That Leaves You Breathless
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4098
- Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:17 pm
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: The Lover and the Perfectionist
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2708
I enjoyed reading this and reflecting on my own feelings as I read it. I crave, crave the truth and don't care if I can't handle it because I know that whatever the truth is, I will be able to handle it no matter how hard it may be. This is really deep, I like it very much. I am living without the t...
- Sat Jul 21, 2007 5:51 pm
- Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
- Topic: What Gentleman Would Speak With Stones (A Villanelle)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7662