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by Ven
Mon Aug 27, 2007 4:12 pm
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: What Gentleman Would Speak With Stones (A Villanelle)
Replies: 10
Views: 5127

I can't believe I haven't read this before now. This is really well done Bags ... Excellent stuff ! :bow:
by Ven
Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:19 am
Forum: Community Favorites, Poem of the Week and Poet of the Month
Topic: Poet of the Month: August 2007 nacona
Replies: 9
Views: 7601

Congratulations Shawn. A well deserved accolade. :thumbsup:
by Ven
Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:58 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: St. Mary's
Replies: 10
Views: 3570

... or:

their messy lives
and glorious days

:?:
by Ven
Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:06 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: St. Mary's
Replies: 10
Views: 3570

On first inspection there are only two things that jump out as in need of amendment. Firstly: ( and this is a matter of personal opinion more than anything so I wouldn't want to argue the point ) Last stanza, first line I would use "can't" rather than "won't". Secondly: Not really keen on the repeti...
by Ven
Sat Aug 11, 2007 10:00 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: gentle love
Replies: 11
Views: 4138

Purrrfectly delightful !
by Ven
Sat Aug 11, 2007 9:41 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: **THE RAVER by gordy allen poe** Community Favorite
Replies: 35
Views: 15168

:lol: :bow:
by Ven
Sat Jul 28, 2007 12:58 pm
Forum: News, Resources & Announcements
Topic: Poems & Art Published
Replies: 5
Views: 6051

Ace ! Congratulations Shawn :thumbsup: That's excellent news ! You so deserve the recognition, your a massively talented writer
... I'm sure I've admitted to being a huge fan of your work already. :mrgreen:
by Ven
Sat Jul 28, 2007 12:37 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Leave Them As They Are
Replies: 3
Views: 2398

I completely agree with Moonflower. This is great ! :cool:
by Ven
Sat Jul 28, 2007 12:31 pm
Forum: Richard Taylor... Poet and Friend
Topic: Richard Taylor. . . Poet and Friend
Replies: 51
Views: 38185

:darn: :crying: Yes, a gentleman and a fine poet ! Such sad news ... My sincere condolences to Richards family.
by Ven
Fri Jul 06, 2007 6:02 pm
Forum: Richard Taylor... Poet and Friend
Topic: Richard Taylor. . . Poet and Friend
Replies: 51
Views: 38185

In my opinion Richard is one of the best creative and technical poets this site has ever had the pleasure of interacting with. His input will be greatly missed.
by Ven
Wed Jul 04, 2007 4:15 am
Forum: Richard Taylor... Poet and Friend
Topic: Richard Taylor. . . Poet and Friend
Replies: 51
Views: 38185

:darn: :crying:
by Ven
Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:07 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: I never inquisitioned anyone.....
Replies: 8
Views: 4082

:bow: :thumbsup:
by Ven
Fri Jun 15, 2007 5:46 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Thoughts on Marriage
Replies: 14
Views: 5577

I tend to agree with Zero in thinking that "Marriage is" should be the title of the poem and that the repeated first line from each stanza should be dropped as it then becomes superfluous.
Just looks tidier to me ... I'm a tidy freak ! :mrgreen:
by Ven
Tue May 01, 2007 1:23 pm
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: Spawned from the Union of Three so Unique/Heinz,Gordy,Bags
Replies: 8
Views: 2380

Hehe ... Way cool guys ! :bow:
by Ven
Mon Apr 30, 2007 2:12 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: **Mary Rose** Forum Award 2008.06.08
Replies: 14
Views: 3872

Ooops ! Myopic :oops: ... Makes metal note to sit a little closer to monitor in future. Thanks Bags


P.S. Nice Bump Heinz ! :mrgreen:

:devil:

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