David, You are a wonderful writer and like all of us, probably your worst critic...keep writing..love your work!
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Your words and sentiment are too kind for a dark and deeply demented mind.... You cannot reach me only shadows of sorrows speak to me they seek and see through me... for I am selfish and untrue unworthy broken and jagged waiting and wanting to be made new... I am numb crass and careless from this cr...
- Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:34 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: As Waves of Time Go Rolling On
- Replies: 8
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I like this, David! We may age and fall apart as will the world around us but as you say, both the view and the journey are what we make it! And wow! What a journey it is! Thanks for being a part of it!
Thanks, gentlemen for your comments...I took a chance posting and am so very glad the two of you got it! David, I like your contest idea...but you'd win as you are so much wiser!
Heart of my heart I struggle as your dad I am not perfect So far from it I try Perhaps, not hard enough To be there for you But you look right through me Your soft green eyes pierce my heart And once again I have failed your expectation And we both walk away In silence The sun has set Darkness turns...
If all roads lead to You Then why are we on a one-way street Going in the wrong direction? Why is every way the right way? Or is it simply because it’s their way? If there are no wrong directions Why do we seem to be missing the mark? Wandering aimlessly lost In a dry desolate desert A wilted waterl...