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by FirestoneFeinberg
Wed Jan 16, 2013 9:10 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Memory Hole
Replies: 3
Views: 224

Re: Memory Hole

Have to read again a few times to understand. Think I get some of the meaning. The form is unique and colorful. David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Wed Jan 16, 2013 9:05 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Details In Due Course
Replies: 8
Views: 296

Re: Details In Due Course

A delightful poem. Light and easy to read. Very clever commentary on part of our ever more commercial world. A pleasure. David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:01 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
Replies: 10
Views: 440

Re: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF

Thank you so much. I think loads of us poets are time-obsessed. I more or less hate clocks and one day I might murder some. It's that bad. Well anyhow, have a good 'time' while we've got it, eh? Shalom, David Awesome! Time...such a fascinating subject. Clocks..the old-time kind...beautiful pieces o...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:57 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
Replies: 10
Views: 440

Re: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF

:hello: David, I enjoyed your poem on time. Your personal view of time speeding past is interesting. It gobbles up our hours faster than we'd sometimes like! And there is nothing we can do to slow it down to our personal pace. Before I can get a few things done, the morning is over! But I must conf...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:46 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
Replies: 10
Views: 440

Re: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF

Thank you for reading the poem and for commenting. Have a great 2013. David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Sat Jan 05, 2013 7:05 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF
Replies: 10
Views: 440

THE CLOCK SAT SMUGLY ON THE SHELF

b’’h 1/4/13 The clock sat smugly on the shelf, As if upon a throne, Contented with uncounted wealth Accrued through debtor-loan. One thousand minutes from the lad Who tried some time to keep — Two hundred hours from the maid Who’d stolen off to sleep — And twenty days the afternoon Full washed away...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:50 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Danced Alone
Replies: 2
Views: 187

Re: Danced Alone

Serene. Easy-going. Intriguing! David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:45 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Chilly - part 2
Replies: 17
Views: 708

Re: Chilly - part 2

An elegant poem with a surreal turn to it. I admit that I don't know what some of the big words mean, but that doesn't Interfere with my ability to enjoy the words. I like the sound of them. The cadence is magnificent. David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:37 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Window Within
Replies: 4
Views: 261

Re: The Window Within

This is a fine poem which I found very enjoyable to read. It has natural easy flow. Although I am not sure what the poems means,as a whole, I also didn't feel lost or confused. This is a friend. Not a challenger. Refreshing.
by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:01 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: My sense -- to some -- insensible --
Replies: 2
Views: 203

Re: My sense -- to some -- insensible --

Dear Darlene,
Thank you for your kind words. You are such a good person. I have 4 stents -- last year I had a massive heart attack. The stents saved my life. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours!
by FirestoneFeinberg
Fri Dec 21, 2012 7:30 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: My sense -- to some -- insensible --
Replies: 2
Views: 203

My sense -- to some -- insensible --

b’’h
12/20/12

My sense — to some — insensible —
My words — too — indirect —
Misunderstanding — usual
Reaction — I — expect.

Forever I've been lonely, tho’ —
As if in prison cell —
What be my way — too strange to know —
Impossible to tell.


by FirestoneFeinberg
Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:48 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: How Casual The Christmas Tree
Replies: 3
Views: 241

Re: How Casual The Christmas Tree

Thank you for the good wishes. It is a 'mitzvah' to 'bentsh likht' with your old friend who survives. I like hope too -- but sometimes I lose it, sir... regardless: Happy holidays to you and yours! --David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Wed Dec 12, 2012 8:11 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: How Casual The Christmas Tree
Replies: 3
Views: 241

How Casual The Christmas Tree

b’’h 12/12/12 How casual the Christmas-tree standing In its stand upon the floor, bauble-bedecked, its Strands of lights bulging as they connect To electric-socket on the wall... And — branding The front door with good cheer — understanding The plight of men, the pine-circle — erect — Centered — fo...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Wed Dec 12, 2012 8:07 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: I'm Closer Now To Heaven
Replies: 13
Views: 727

Re: I'm Closer Now To Heaven

Beautiful message in elegant form. The whole poem is wonderful. I especially like how it all leads up to the last verse. A special poem, Darlene! --David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Wed Dec 12, 2012 8:04 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Silence Of His Own Dismay
Replies: 11
Views: 649

Re: The Silence Of His Own Dismay

Absolutely excellent! --David

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