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by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Jul 29, 2013 7:46 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Apathy
Replies: 2
Views: 429

Re: Apathy

It is a fact We must act! Indifference can no longer be tolerated As a nation’s foundations are obliterated With elected traitors who usher in tyranny While we the people wear rose-colored glasses Only seeing what we want to see State controlled media manipulate We remain idle as an administration ...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Jul 22, 2013 12:47 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: It's been hot for weeks...
Replies: 8
Views: 612

Re: It's been hot for weeks...

nekot wrote:Those last two words wrap it up so nicely - "weather is" - while at the same time, leaving it unwrapped too.

:thumbsup:

I like that comment. It says something that gave me a different -- and better -- insight into that peculiar last line.
Thank you nekot. --David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Sat Jul 20, 2013 8:54 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: It's been hot for weeks...
Replies: 8
Views: 612

Re: It's been hot for weeks...

:hello: I think more people than you realize care about your inner temperature and well being! So sorry that you are feeling cold inside. I'd like to think you are adjusting your inner barometer and adding more warmth as needed. As for me, My thoughts and actions help to adjust my inner thermometer...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Tue Jul 16, 2013 7:41 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: It's been hot for weeks...
Replies: 8
Views: 612

Re: It's been hot for weeks...

bags123 wrote:Must agree with you. Sometimes a parched soul is worse than any storm. :cheers:

Thanks bags. Hope all is well. David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Jul 15, 2013 8:07 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: It's been hot for weeks...
Replies: 8
Views: 612

It's been hot for weeks...

b"h 7/13/13 It's been hot for weeks -- hot and humid here In New York. But I have been cold for years -- cold And confused. The weather has little effect on Me. The temperature has nothing to do with Reality... It's a measure of something -- I'm sure it Is -- but there's no thermometer for anything...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:47 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: TO GIVE IS GOOD
Replies: 5
Views: 598

Re: TO GIVE IS GOOD

Thanks for commenting. Hope all is well. --david
by FirestoneFeinberg
Tue Feb 26, 2013 4:19 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Brothers and Sisters
Replies: 12
Views: 519

Re: Brothers and Sisters

hahaha
by FirestoneFeinberg
Sun Feb 24, 2013 3:18 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Survival Tactics.
Replies: 3
Views: 430

Re: Survival Tactics.

A warm and wooly thing. Enjoyable. I always like tales of the moors; and sheep are cool too. It all adds up to a pastoral picture -- pretty and peaceful. --David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Sun Feb 24, 2013 3:11 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Flowers In His Garden
Replies: 4
Views: 376

Re: Flowers In His Garden

Beautiful. Sweet. Very. Good! --David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Sun Feb 24, 2013 3:05 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Brothers and Sisters
Replies: 12
Views: 519

Re: Brothers and Sisters

I thought I knew what this poem was about -- just what it seems to be about. And I thought the man was the Pete of The Who. But then I got lost in all the sexual and baseball innuendo... Look, I'm sixty-two years old, but I'm still kinda naive. Anyway I lost the thread... or dropped the ball, as it ...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:27 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: TO GIVE IS GOOD
Replies: 5
Views: 598

Re: TO GIVE IS GOOD

but you HAVE returned the love...
by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:54 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: TO GIVE IS GOOD
Replies: 5
Views: 598

TO GIVE IS GOOD

b’’h
1/3/13



To give is good — a forgone fact —
Tho’ cast in vain deceit —
Since be it somewhat selfish act —
What giving — but — receipt?


by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:47 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: America Was
Replies: 8
Views: 859

Re: America Was

Very simply put, David! So simple...but oh, so true...thanks for your candidness!!!... -Travis :thumbsup: My mother brought me up to say Thank You; I somehow missed saying it to you. So Thank You Travis! I am grateful for your kind comment and I am glad you dig the poem. Hope all is well. --David
by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Feb 04, 2013 6:13 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Chilliest Part of the Room
Replies: 12
Views: 911

Re: The Chilliest Part of the Room

this is really great. it is like a picture and a memory. it has a beautiful quality and takes me back through the years! bravo! --david
by FirestoneFeinberg
Mon Feb 04, 2013 6:06 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Time to Go.
Replies: 2
Views: 305

Re: Time to Go.

this is a terrific poem expressed clearly and creatively. the ending is superb. wonderful, pr. david

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