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by heinzs
Mon May 13, 2002 1:56 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 3720

Angel

Thanks, Moongem! I never know what inspires these pieces, or when to expect them to come to me. So I, too, shall have to wait for the next installment.
by heinzs
Mon May 13, 2002 1:53 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 4011

Digging the Bones

Thank you, moongem. Obviously an immortal race of beings could very well inspire a sequel! *grin*
by heinzs
Wed May 08, 2002 2:44 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Diner at the Edge of Never
Replies: 8
Views: 2838

The Diner at the Edge of Never

This was just a short inspiration. Glad you like it!
by heinzs
Wed May 08, 2002 2:43 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 4011

Digging the Bones

Hehe... I don't post that much here. The rest of my poems are at allpoetry.com under the same name. Glad you like the stories!
by heinzs
Wed May 08, 2002 2:41 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 3720

Angel

Thank you, Buttercup... I'm glad you like my little Angel story! This is probably a one-shot.
by heinzs
Wed May 08, 2002 2:40 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The New Kid
Replies: 12
Views: 3957

The New Kid

Thanks, Buttercup! I like this story, too, and hope the muse decides to reveal a sequel.
by heinzs
Sun May 05, 2002 11:58 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: reflections (extended version)
Replies: 23
Views: 6286

reflections (extended version)

Now, of course, if I thought your poem "sucked" I wouldn't have made the suggestion (LOL) j/k You're welcome. That's what this board is here for... encouragement and support. Anything less than that is unacceptable here. [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]
by heinzs
Sat May 04, 2002 1:25 am
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Diner at the Edge of Never
Replies: 8
Views: 2838

The Diner at the Edge of Never

Thanks, devious. I was going for that "Twilight Zone" feeling.

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by heinzs
Fri May 03, 2002 10:31 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: reflections (extended version)
Replies: 23
Views: 6286

reflections (extended version)

Well, you got Val and Abbie and shaz... I'm surprized bags hasn't been on. Maybe Michael and Patrick will see it, or stephanie. Keep it up for a while... I know that means refreshing it every other day so it stays on page 1 *grin*. It's a good piece... not my general cup of tea, though. I can see wh...
by heinzs
Fri May 03, 2002 9:57 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Digging the Bones
Replies: 16
Views: 4011

Digging the Bones

Digging the Bones Bones - I don't know why they were important. They sat there in profusion. Long bones, short bones, ribs and vertebrae - the skulls drew my attention. They were alarmingly human, yet not quite so - I couldn't immediately identify what about them bothered me. My eyes became more acc...
by heinzs
Fri May 03, 2002 9:54 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Angel
Replies: 15
Views: 3720

Angel

Angel I had gone for my usual evening walk. The full Passover moon made it unnecessary to carry a lantern against the dark. She was sitting at the side of the road. Her small body wracked with sobs. At first I couldn't discern the reason for her deep grief - then I put my hand on her shoulder. What ...
by heinzs
Fri May 03, 2002 9:52 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Diner at the Edge of Never
Replies: 8
Views: 2838

The Diner at the Edge of Never

The Diner at the Edge of Never Damn Toyota! I vented my anger once again as my feet splashed in the great puddles. Maybe I should have stayed in the car - but I hadn't seen another in over an hour. But, then, I would still have been dry. I cursed myself for being impatient. The rain continued to com...
by heinzs
Fri May 03, 2002 9:50 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The New Kid
Replies: 12
Views: 3957

The New Kid

The New Kid My life changed that day. Nothing could ever be the same again. Mom and Dad both killed in the car crash, Aunt Millie and Uncle Dan taking over, moving into the house. They had always hated Mom. Called her a "Witch", and despised me, as well. They hadn't even called on my 12th birthday. ...
by heinzs
Fri May 03, 2002 9:47 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Vagabond
Replies: 28
Views: 7700

Vagabond

Vagabond part 1: Autumn Sunlight glistens off cornstalks moist with early morning dew. A spider's web shines like a lace curtain festooned with pearls. The road stretches invitingly before me, and I savor the cool autumn air. As I walk I brush the last of the pine needles from my clothing - a conseq...
by heinzs
Thu May 02, 2002 10:58 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: The Inner Struggle
Replies: 1
Views: 880

The Inner Struggle

Remarkable germ of a story here. Good action, but rather emotionless in the third person. Try rewriting it in first person and putting some emotion into it. First paragraph: How about "Since before she could talk, the lessons of battle were recited to her and became the lessons of life." [img]images...

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