Poetry Pages

This is very creative and a fun read.

Bobbi

I have to agree, this is very beautiful.

Bobbi

ROFLMAO! Sorry I didn't see this one sooner it's hilarious.

Bobbi

ROFLMAO This was so well written and just so very funny.

Bobbi

While there is a sadness in this, there is a love that shines through. It brought a tear to my eye.

Bobbi

This is so beautiful, you captured the feeling of being lost in a loves eyes perfectly. I love this poem.

Bobbi

ROFLMAO

Bobbi

Thanks Moonflower, I appreciate your kind words. This is about my oldest son, who died way too young, but as long as he is still loved and remembered he will live on in a small way.

Thanks also for your warm welcome.

Bobbi

Thanks for the warm welcome, my name is Bobbi, and yes I'm an American born and raised, and darn proud to be one. Don't know why you'd think otherwise, but it's all in perspective.

Bobbi

I like the humor in this, but when I reread it with a touch of an Irish brogue it was hilarious. Good poem, great flow.

Bobbi

This was so beautifully sweet it brought a happy tear to my eye.

Bobbi

Heinzs, thanks for reading and commenting. I'm sure one of the elves bailed him out, or he laid his finger aside his nose and just disappeared back to his sleigh.


Moonflower, thanks, glad you enjoyed.

Bobbi

Sorry for your loss, but you wrote a beautiful tribute.

Bobbi

He flew on wings of eagles, Spirit soared as dreamers do, Tortured soul so creatively gifted, Left this world by his own hand. The world should mourn the loss, An artist who's gifts were few, If he'd chosen to stay on earth, His talents would be shared by all. Gave into temptation of darkness, Could...

What a great way to say thanks.

Bobbi