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by Hiyu
Mon Mar 26, 2007 2:57 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: The Extremes of the Perfectionist
Replies: 3
Views: 1380

The Extremes of the Perfectionist

The extremes of the perfectionist goes with the flow of the bad and the good as the follower of the angel he plucks the strings as the follower of the devil she plucks the strings out You say, I'm perfect Too perfect in fact... Too perfect for you to fathom... I'm fed up of being fed up Sick and tir...
by Hiyu
Sat Mar 24, 2007 12:04 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: I'll be Waiting...
Replies: 7
Views: 2764

hehe... i liked the last line so myself... thanks!!! :)
by Hiyu
Fri Mar 23, 2007 4:30 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: I'll be Waiting...
Replies: 7
Views: 2764

thanks very much for that reply... it really flattered me! :)
by Hiyu
Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:07 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: When Nostalgia became a Weapon...
Replies: 1
Views: 793

BUMP! :mrgreen:
by Hiyu
Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:49 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: When Expectations became a Man's Meaning
Replies: 2
Views: 974

somehow i can pity spider-man... just because of one spider bite, his life became a life of pressure...

with great power comes great responsibility... ain't it THAT right..!
by Hiyu
Wed Mar 07, 2007 10:10 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: When Expectations became a Man's Meaning
Replies: 2
Views: 974

When Expectations became a Man's Meaning

It is too tiring Doing things not because it's necessary But because It is expected. Can it be that I just lie down and face the sky With no troubles ahead of me Sit down and waste my mind? But heck no! One moment of let go Can spell me a big trouble Because if I can't do a thing I can never face li...
by Hiyu
Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:51 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: When Nostalgia became a Weapon...
Replies: 1
Views: 793

When Nostalgia became a Weapon...

I hate you Don't say I'm sorry... Coz i know you're not... And even if you were, it's not for me... It's for what you've done to me... I'm tired! Can i be the one to make you cry instead of the one that catches you? I'm sure i have not loved you... yet... Argh! i know... you want someone else... don...
by Hiyu
Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:29 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: I'll be Waiting...
Replies: 7
Views: 2764

oh thanks for that errors gillian!! im very glad u liked this poem... :D
by Hiyu
Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:22 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: I'll be Waiting...
Replies: 7
Views: 2764

I'll be Waiting...

It's... cold Million layers of clothing Billion light years from candles But still... It's cold... Am i freezing to death? I have no disease... I just can't think of my rhymes... I know I'm not running out of time... Yet, it's still cold... A stroll in the park of snows... Look at those couples walk...
by Hiyu
Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:07 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Truth
Replies: 7
Views: 2795

what a coincindence...

just picked a poem to read, and it just popped to my mind that i must read this poem...

and

KABOOM!!!

it just... summed up what i'm feeling right now...

how ironic that this sad piece makes me happy... but happy for what?

:crying:
by Hiyu
Sun Jul 02, 2006 5:16 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: To an Angel
Replies: 3
Views: 2335

thanks!! actually this was waaaaay back in december. but it's really a surprise that someone did reply! thanks again! by the way, i turned 14 last june 26. ehehe :D :angel: :angel:
by Hiyu
Fri Feb 10, 2006 4:43 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: **Special Angel**
Replies: 17
Views: 4038

thanks gingy!! :D
by Hiyu
Sun Feb 05, 2006 2:22 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: **Special Angel**
Replies: 17
Views: 4038

waw!! please allow me to use this as a valentine's greeting@!!

PLEASE I BEG YOU GINGY!!

PLEASE!!!

:crying: :bow: :mrgreen:
by Hiyu
Sat Dec 24, 2005 4:07 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: To an Angel
Replies: 3
Views: 2335

To an Angel

As some of you may know, this is already the FOURTH post of my poem.. I don't intend to put it to every place but I really didn't know where I can get serious comments until If Only told me this is the right place... Anyway here is my first serious poem dedicated to my crush. I am from the Philippin...

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