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by Hiyu
Tue May 06, 2008 2:52 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Don't Let Go
Replies: 2
Views: 767

Re: Don't Let Go

thanks man. hoped you like it. actually this poem is reserved for a future special someone... kinda inspired when i made this, but i don't have a gf ryt now... :)
by Hiyu
Mon May 05, 2008 4:41 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Don't Let Go
Replies: 2
Views: 767

Don't Let Go

And the world's not as heavy as it used to be 'Cause I know it'll seem I won't carry a thing at all It may even be impossible to fall I know you'll catch me I'm so happy the pieces finally fell To its rightful places And now, I can't hide this feeling of joy Hold on to me as I say... Don't let go of...
by Hiyu
Sat May 03, 2008 6:49 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Faye
Replies: 1
Views: 561

Faye

It's all so easy to say Things that're the hardest to do So, oh hey! Obey what I say Amid all the lies, I know this is true I painted your skies gray You don't know? I used you Didn't I tell? My heart is clay Soft, used, now polished and new So now, you heard, run away! Don't ever listen to the thin...
by Hiyu
Mon Dec 24, 2007 9:41 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: The Epic of the Red Love Story
Replies: 1
Views: 1141

The Epic of the Red Love Story

"If you want something With all your mind, heart and soul The universe will conspire For you to have it" -- An unanticipated memory entwined our destinies Unexpectedly unfolding the love that never was A look in the eyes, a gesture from the soul The moments are born into the lover's grasp The soul, ...
by Hiyu
Mon Dec 24, 2007 8:48 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Rhed
Replies: 1
Views: 1049

Rhed

I would journey through hell and back 'Coz I know my fate is to love Burn me, break me and devour me It's alright as long it's for you I would journey through heaven and back 'Coz I know I'm in love with you Push me, pull the strings and let me fall I'd survive 'coz I know it's for you Would you giv...
by Hiyu
Thu Oct 18, 2007 7:06 am
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Ramblings of the Broken Hearted
Replies: 4
Views: 893

Re: Ramblings of the Broken Hearted

good thing this is bumped! a good read indeed... you got me inspired for a poem. the emotions can be clearly felt... i loved the read! though... my sympathy for a broken heart... i can indeed feel the way you do somehow... the words sometimes become sharp-edged swords you know. :)
by Hiyu
Thu May 17, 2007 9:50 pm
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Grandpa and Grandma
Replies: 1
Views: 1043

Grandpa and Grandma

You died just too soon Yet I have developed my love for you But before I knew it, both of you entered to the room I rushed at you Yet when i hugged grandma both of you vanished Then I woke up somehow i knew all along It's just a dream I told it to my dad And he said to me, "May 24 will be the birthd...
by Hiyu
Tue May 01, 2007 8:59 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: The Win for the Team, a Win for Me, a Lose for my Ego
Replies: 2
Views: 2666

The Win for the Team, a Win for Me, a Lose for my Ego

A major comeback As seconds drift away The ten became four And before we knew it We were on the run The ball seemed unfamiliar, though Can't seem to put in inside that hole Many free shots go to waste In my endeavor to score Then it came to me I must go for the ball, right? Leave the scoring to othe...
by Hiyu
Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:42 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: It was never Meant to be a Game, because it's a Way of Life
Replies: 1
Views: 811

It was never Meant to be a Game, because it's a Way of Life

Everyday I'd force myself to wake up to an ungodly morning resisting so much force of inertia from my ever so cozy bed But then I know that what forces me to do so is not because I love this game so much But it's because this game has become my way of living I'd jog out of my house Daydreaming to be...
by Hiyu
Thu Mar 29, 2007 10:41 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: In a Teen's Eyes - The Love Cycle
Replies: 6
Views: 1557

Glad to have been of help! I really like your work and hope to keep reading it and if wanted and necessary helping it develop. BB i really liked it, it just sums up so many feelings and thoughts in less words i suppose lol....i suppose that is like the love cycle because i know not exactly but very...
by Hiyu
Thu Mar 29, 2007 10:34 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: The Extremes of the Perfectionist
Replies: 3
Views: 1381

thank you graeme and squawk! i'll edit the poem now. thanks!
by Hiyu
Thu Mar 29, 2007 1:42 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: In a Teen's Eyes - The Love Cycle
Replies: 6
Views: 1557

thanks for that reply!! hehehe... i really appreciate it... :grin:
by Hiyu
Wed Mar 28, 2007 11:49 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: In a Teen's Eyes - The Love Cycle
Replies: 6
Views: 1557

:bump: :critique:
by Hiyu
Wed Mar 28, 2007 1:47 am
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: Re-captured (a nonet)
Replies: 3
Views: 2299

i'm a man.

And through this poem, i see a woman's perspective so well...
by Hiyu
Wed Mar 28, 2007 1:32 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: In a Teen's Eyes - The Love Cycle
Replies: 6
Views: 1557

In a Teen's Eyes - The Love Cycle

It all starts with... One look One glance One query To send me in a trance She has the hair like a fabric Worth trillions of dollars She has the smile of an angel That seemed light years away But something whispers to me To end it right there Leave all of my impossible fantasy And of the reality I m...

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