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by kuperian4ever
Fri Jan 03, 2014 8:10 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: My lovely, sweet bassoon
Replies: 5
Views: 601

My lovely, sweet bassoon

My lovely, sweet bassoon You were always there for me You have always cared for me You will always swear by me And to me, you attune Your life has been my instrument That I’ve played like my bassoon Sweet, sweet music sung of love A song I’ve always sung because Your love is my perfume And always a...
by kuperian4ever
Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:47 pm
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: Cosmic Shoplifting
Replies: 3
Views: 957

Cosmic Shoplifting

Cosmic Shop Lifting I spent some time in a cosmic store Pickin and choosin this and that It was different from here that was sure But it all comes from where I put on my hat Space dust and clouds Diamond lights and a whole lotta distance There’s nary a crowd But that only comes with my firm insiste...
by kuperian4ever
Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:03 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: More Than I'll Admit
Replies: 8
Views: 1479

Re: More Than I'll Admit

That's how polite people say, Gee Kupe....you're strange
Thanks for your polite come back, bags123, just sayin


:shrug: .. :arrow: .. :thumbsup:
by kuperian4ever
Thu Jan 02, 2014 12:47 am
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: Whirled Peas
Replies: 3
Views: 1033

Whirled Peas

Whirled peas The wacky world of whirled peas Blended just so they displease The ardent crowd who all agrees It’s better just to think, “appease.” Green and natural whirled peas They like them whirled So please don’t squeeze They hope you’ll whirl If they ask please And please don’t freeze their whi...
by kuperian4ever
Thu Jan 02, 2014 12:09 am
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: 25 cent words
Replies: 19
Views: 4798

Re: 25 cent words

(istic?) It's not idealistic To be anachronistic If you're not humanistic And not fatalistic...but Being Capitalistic And not Socialistic An Imperialistic Could be jingoistic Now I'm not a mystic but more synergistic I'm not a linguistic But simply heuristic ..... Alright ...... I'll stop now - thi...
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 10:48 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: To secure my place in this world
Replies: 6
Views: 1049

Re: To secure my place in this world

Crack a beer and steer it near your pie hole
After you smell it, swill it and don't spill it
Repeat as many times as necessary
Beer is medicine for the soul
And bacon, gotta have bacon
Yipper Skipper!!

:cheers:
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 10:36 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Asocial Disorder
Replies: 2
Views: 479

Re: Asocial Disorder

Uh...no, it seems you're part of the pro-social order
Got the beer, in a cheer, so it's clear, see?
Beer + cheer = pro-social order
I'll take one off the tap
myself

Belly up


:grin: :cheers: :wink:
:cool:
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 8:43 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Cold November Kiss
Replies: 0
Views: 439

Cold November Kiss

Cold November kiss I remember when I loved you The leaves were green and supple The flowers grew wild across the pasture Creating rainbows of color waving in the sun It was fun then, when I loved you Then you changed The leaves have turned colors and fall like snow The flowers withered with your ch...
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 7:44 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Would that you love me
Replies: 0
Views: 551

Would that you love me

Would that you love me Feel free to worship me in the tender nights we share Why care? I'm here with you and you're an angel in my eyes Your touch thrills me madly, your caress a sonnet grand Our love is deep, our passion strong, our words a lullaby Dare I give you my heart in so many broken pieces...
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 6:47 pm
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: but still I have to ask...
Replies: 8
Views: 1421

Re: but still I have to ask...

The questions one raises up to God in faith finds the answers later, like a feather, in the winds of thought, that floats into the conscious mind, as a revelation that comes from searching inwardly, or, like it was specifically placed there, as a gift from a loving father. I have also found the ans...
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:58 pm
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: A Word For The Discouraged
Replies: 8
Views: 1044

Re: A Word For The Discouraged

Simply wonderful, Darlene.
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:53 pm
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: The Tables Have Turned
Replies: 26
Views: 7190

Re: The Tables Have Turned

The hidden sin pen bringing up my own sin sticking to the underside of my self denial mind. Its a shocking find when convicted by the Holy Spirit to finally repent. Then facing those sins in that process, humbling your pride before God and asking for forgiveness through his son Jesus brings one fac...
by kuperian4ever
Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:37 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Love
Replies: 0
Views: 540

Love

Love Love, that magical mystery of the human mind From whence does it come and to where can we find it's essence, it's coalescence, from the mystic to the real? It's esoteric properties, in it's purest quintessence, only the enlightened can feel. Where does it live, where does it hide, who does it ...
by kuperian4ever
Tue Dec 31, 2013 4:32 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Bones
Replies: 3
Views: 751

Bones

Bones The bones of a relationship lost Lie scattered in the heat But every now and then You will find some still have meat. And when you smell that heated meat On the bones of that lost love. You remember how it started Then was lost in one big shove. You remember all the good times How your hearts...
by kuperian4ever
Tue Dec 31, 2013 4:20 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: More Than I'll Admit
Replies: 8
Views: 1479

Re: More Than I'll Admit

Darn good write, bags123
It got me rhyming immediately
Love your poems
Their rhyme, they're meter
I don't see how they could be much sweeter

Ok, that's it.
I'm writing poetry to a guy
O M G
:lol:

Is that a good critique
or would you like to critique
my critique

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