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by jeannerené
Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:39 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: mama ...
Replies: 3
Views: 454

Re: mama ...

Thanks Bags and Kimmyjean! :hello:
by jeannerené
Thu Nov 27, 2014 11:56 am
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: Happy Thanksgiving
Replies: 8
Views: 551

Re: Happy Thanksgiving

Happy Thanksgiving!!! Wishing you all well ......... :hearts:

:hugs:
jeanne
by jeannerené
Sat Mar 01, 2014 11:02 am
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: HAPPY BIRTHDAY E.T. AND BAGS!!!!
Replies: 9
Views: 411

Re: HAPPY BIRTHDAY E.T. AND BAGS!!!!

... still laughing at Lady Saturn's and Michael's posts :lol:

Happy Birthday E.T. and Bags .......... celebrate on the house! :hello:

jeanne :thewave:
by jeannerené
Sat Mar 01, 2014 10:57 am
Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
Topic: Personal Progress (A Villanelle)
Replies: 9
Views: 965

Re: Oral Tradition (A Villanelle)

I've always like the Villanelle and the challenge to repeat lines and make them work with each verse.

Nice Bags ... a very comtemplative write that works well in Villanelle form.

~jeanne
by jeannerené
Sat Mar 01, 2014 10:52 am
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: I finally wrote a poem
Replies: 44
Views: 1813

Re: I finally wrote a poem

Never have had vivid recall of my dreams and I am way too lazy to get up and write anything down. I've always just remembered a snippet or a passing thought or simply that I know I was dreaming ...

Oh well ...

:)
by jeannerené
Fri Feb 28, 2014 11:21 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: It's not me
Replies: 2
Views: 625

Re: It's not me

Hope1994,

There is such a longing to be heard, to be noticed voiced in your poem and I can feel the loneliness ... pain.

Keep writing as Michael said ...

Many good wishes to you,

jeanne
by jeannerené
Fri Feb 28, 2014 11:18 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: RESPONSE
Replies: 2
Views: 225

Re: RESPONSE

Very nice Lady,

I really liked how you tied beginning and end together. Nice progression of thought, as well.

Enjoyed.

~jeanne
by jeannerené
Fri Feb 28, 2014 11:16 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: FALL FROM GRACE
Replies: 5
Views: 327

Re: FALL FROM GRACE

... so frustrating all these decisions/nondecisions our government makes.

Enjoyed reading your strong voice once again,

jeanne
by jeannerené
Fri Feb 28, 2014 11:11 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Above the Roar of the Inconsequence
Replies: 3
Views: 271

Above the Roar of the Inconsequence

I am a child of concrete of window vignettes unwanted, unavoidable. Contact, communication with the human condition that contaminates, cements my visage into wrinkles of camaraderie, cohesion of war and peace and dinner debates. “I am, I am,” clanging my spoon upon the bottom of my pot, clamoring ab...
by jeannerené
Fri Feb 28, 2014 10:11 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: mama ...
Replies: 3
Views: 454

mama ...

I remember when you looked like Gina Lollobrigida although perhaps the housewife version your slender waist accented with a hand-stitched apron and low-heeled pumps even in the kitchen singing a favorite Sinatra hit at the sink washing dishes as if it were a duty but every once in a while ... slippi...
by jeannerené
Fri Feb 28, 2014 4:59 pm
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: Done with Facebook
Replies: 4
Views: 327

Re: Done with Facebook

Welll ..... not so done ... I got it cleared up .... but when I got on this morning I had 30 unauthorized charges ....... I will not advertise on FaceBook again ... every now and again I would advertise my Zazzle store ... My cover photo was some gambling game and so was my profile photo .......... ...
by jeannerené
Fri Feb 28, 2014 11:23 am
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: Done with Facebook
Replies: 4
Views: 327

Done with Facebook

Done with FaceBook ... will explain later ...

Will see you all here ... I intend to be here more often.....

Thanks Melissa ................


jeannne
by jeannerené
Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:57 pm
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: Thief of Dreams
Replies: 6
Views: 346

Re: Thief of Dreams

Happy Birthday, Terry!!!!! :thewave:
by jeannerené
Wed Jan 01, 2014 11:52 pm
Forum: Open Discussions and Members' Messages
Topic: Happy New Year!
Replies: 3
Views: 284

Re: Happy New Year!

Happy New Year!!!! :hugs:
by jeannerené
Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:23 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Prayer for relief Experimental form.
Replies: 2
Views: 163

Re: Prayer for relief Experimental form.

Hi,

Good sense of hopelessness in the narrator you've created ...

Curious ... will you be continue this work into a longer version ... I like it.

jeanne

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