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by Lonnie
Fri Aug 17, 2012 5:32 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Kindergarten
Replies: 4
Views: 1462

Re: Kindergarten

Nice write, Travis, I really enjoyed it!
by Lonnie
Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:18 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Rain Dance
Replies: 5
Views: 869

Re: Rain Dance

My thanks go out to Travis and Bags123 for their kind and much appreciated comments!
by Lonnie
Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:46 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Rain Dance
Replies: 5
Views: 869

Re: Rain Dance

Well thank you, I think! LOL!!
by Lonnie
Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:15 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Rain Dance
Replies: 5
Views: 869

Rain Dance

Rain Dance Melodic staccato of rhythmic rain pattering softly against the glass of my inter-dimensional windowpane bringing me visions that weep and pass Pattering softly against the glass creating a sound that others miss bringing me visions that weep and pass like star-crossed lovers who sadly kis...
by Lonnie
Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:39 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: I...AM
Replies: 3
Views: 634

Re: I...AM

Short and simple but powerful also!

This piece says much with little wordage, and makes the reader think about the message! Bravo!
by Lonnie
Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:36 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Real Heros
Replies: 6
Views: 1020

Re: Real Heros

Great theme here!

I would like to see this in a different structure, as I feel it would enhance what is already a fine piece of work!
by Lonnie
Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:31 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: As The Nothingness Consumes
Replies: 6
Views: 953

Re: As The Nothingness Consumes

A very passionate and powerful poem!

You have captured much pain here, and the reader can feel it as it seeps out between the well-penned lines of this fine piece! Thank you for sharing this work!
by Lonnie
Sat Aug 11, 2012 4:37 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: A Wartime Flashback
Replies: 5
Views: 934

Re: A Wartime Flashback

I thank you kindly!

As a veteran of Vietnam, I know a bit about what this poem addresses! Thanks for the kind words!
by Lonnie
Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:40 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: A Wartime Flashback
Replies: 5
Views: 934

Re: A Wartime Flashback

My thanks to both Travis and Heinzs for their kind comments!
by Lonnie
Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:38 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Apache
Replies: 6
Views: 828

Re: Apache

Thank you, Travis! I appreciate the read and the feedback!
by Lonnie
Tue Aug 07, 2012 3:37 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: A Day Of Learning
Replies: 4
Views: 650

Re: A Day Of Learning

Thanks, Travis! Glad you enjoyed it!
by Lonnie
Tue Jul 31, 2012 4:16 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Apache
Replies: 6
Views: 828

Re: Apache

Thanks much!

Well, that's me, grim and poetic! LOL!!
by Lonnie
Tue Jul 31, 2012 4:15 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: A Day Of Learning
Replies: 4
Views: 650

Re: A Day Of Learning

My thanks to you!

I thought I would post something a little more positive for a change!
by Lonnie
Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:55 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Apache
Replies: 6
Views: 828

Re: Apache

Thank you very much!

I didn't expect a response this soon, you overwhelmed me!
by Lonnie
Mon Jul 30, 2012 9:53 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Eavesdropping On A Goodnight Kiss
Replies: 6
Views: 838

Re: Eavesdropping On A Goodnight Kiss

You are most welcome, dear lady!

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