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Hey that's nice :) A breakfast can break many barriers!
Love the alliterations and how the food arrangement pictures your experience together. Clever

Haha..and the first cut is the deepest

All better now though thanks

Great stuff thanks! I shall make some changes as recommended and see how it feels. Thanks again

Thanks very much for your time and kind coments. It's very gratifying to know that what I write isn't completely wasted and is appreciated :grin: I am, however, intrigued by your comments concerning categorisation and wondered if you might be able to expand further on your thoughts? How would you de...

I’ve lived a fairly carefree life never sheltered but hardly careless thus I’ve escaped the pain of serious injuries and avoided situations that were rife with life threatening circumstances the like of which you’re more likely to find within the pages of Readers Digest in the darkest of dentists wa...

I shall never forget his diminutive stature and pock-marked face his grasp of the Queens English offset by Farsi inflection and his brown leather driving gloves patterned with a myriad of ventilation pinpricks mostly I will not forget his expressionless eyes ha! unwitting pawn take this innocuous pa...

I call your name you turn your head and smile (click) an auburn avalanche cascades toward your shoulder with a bouffant attitude as the month old perm concedes custody of the curls your backward glance transfixes me with its hazel clarity and I almost miss the moment your smile generates a warmth t...

Wow thanks :grin: I hope your faith is not misplaced. I have taken on board your comment and agree with it totally. It was so obviously wrong and I should have done something about it before posting but you've given me the nudge I needed. The only problem is that in changing it, one thing led to ano...

THIS PICTURE I call your name you turn your head and smile (click) your beautiful auburn hair falls below your shoulder seemingly bouffant as the month old perm loses custody of the curls your eyes pierce me with hazel clarity I am transfixed by their gaze and nearly miss this perfect shot and your...

I have lived two lives and many broken dreams yet your love is the life I need to make me complete your love gives my life meaning you, the mender of my dreams <<>> Sedoka: The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pa...

I still sense you

your scent lingers
like the fresh smell
of distant rain
after a storm

in the darkness
of your absence
I inhale
your essence

and sense you still

Haha...thanks guys for your honest and forthright responses..I love it!! In hindsight i shouldn't have really posted this one. This 'poem' is pure kowtow. It is the contrived claptrap revision of one that was given quite a harsh slating for various reasons in another poetry group that I frequent. It...

English Ship English Persona French-Spanish Ship French-Spanish Persona <<>> TRAFALGAR Prelude The Franco-Spanish fleet blockaded at Cádiz, On September Sixteenth, Eighteen-ought-Five, Heard orders from Napoleon for the moment to seize: “Set sail for Naples and there conquest contrive!” But Admiral...

GODIFGU The fair Lady Godifgu, the Lady of Coventry town; In anguish she wept and with anger was fraught At the misery, Leofric’s tax had brought down Upon the folk who, ere the tax, already had naught. At this she saddened and in her mind a plan was caught: Godifgu, ‘tis said, came to Leofric when...

Haha! Excellent stuff.... I vant to suck your throat!
A whole new concept for me.. a toothless, powerless, aged vampire.. great stuff