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Just to make it easier for you all, I'll post the intended third part which was posted in another section of the forum here. The order that they will run in for the three part poem is as they are posted in this thread. Any thoughts regarding how each piece interacts and flows would greatly be apprec...

I have two poems I would like some opinions on - they were written at different times and were not originally intended to be put together, but I've been considering making them two parts of a three part poem, the third of which I've posted in the Member's Cafe under the title 'Compendium on Time'. H...

I like the solemnity of this, it goes very well with its subject matter. The one thing I'd like to point out is that some of the stanzas (the last two in particular) don't flow as well as the first two - I think it might have something to do with the amount of syllables present. Maybe if you reworde...

bags123 - that's okay, I'm not getting offended. Thank you for the critique. As heinz said, there is 'prose' poetry - there doesn't need to be rhyme or even structure for me to consider it poetry. There's actually a good post about this in one of the other threads that I read the other day. heinz - ...

Thanks a lot guys! heinz, I've had a few remarks similar to yours before, but the poem was actually written simply about the act of rolling rather than any real message about what is being rolled. Though of course, I'm sure if you use your imagination, some nicer things than tobacco still fit the th...

there is a process to living
soft and immaculate, in
the gentle placing of
the careful rolling of
the tender wetting of
then the inhalation
a reflection of one's
reverberation

I'm quite pleased with the way this is written, but there's just something about it that makes feel it's not really up to scratch. It may just be the concept itself, or even the structure/delivery, but some opinions on it would be very much appreciated =) --------------------------- the greatest sho...

hey guys, I Stumbled across these forums and thought it'd be a good idea to join seeing as I read and write a lot of poetry. Here's one I wrote a couple of months ago: I’m about to begin work on Forever but I don’t know how long it will take by the time I’m done with Now who knows When it will be ma...