Poetry Pages

yeah, pam's bad. she likes it that way! [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]

thx terry & yeah... [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]

debab, thx for all the encouragement... i have been to the doc, and i guess it's allergies. so now i take clariten and it works much better. tylenol obviously wasn't cutting it. the 10k mg's was over a period of about 3 days. i know it's terrible to do that, i was desperate. i guess you figured out ...

[img]images/smiles/icon_sad.gif[/img] is right... "she" is your daughter? if so, she's not old enough yet. um, i don't know what else to say except yes, i know how you feel, you are not alone.

ach! suffocation and drowing... this is dark. still, it sounds like you're thinking, and searching... all i can say is keep writing and keep plugging. you have a way of making it hit home.

thanks, erin, as always after seeing what you had to say, i actually felt like i might have some talent... [img]images/smiles/icon_rolleyes.gif[/img] you sure know how to look out for my self esteem for me! of course there are several others on this who do too... i just hope that was real & not thro...

i wrote it in approximately 1-1/2 hrs, starting with the second i walked into my house (that begs for bleach). my firsts drafts are all by hand. it was like taking a deep breath, diving to the bottom of the ocean, and coming to the surface with the last word. i've picked over it a couple times, but ...

(NON-SEQUENCIAL) THE CITIES (non-sequential) My friend unfolded like a fragile flower, a special and unique kind that can bloom more than once, even after crushed and dead-looking. I drove around the block (or a dozen blocks) three times to pick her up, past brick and vines, cement walls, a century-...

another really good one... funny what we don't hear when we're alone sometimes huh? sometimes ourselves, sometimes god, and sometimes....???

nice...more of the same from me...

<a name="#thirty two"> Fell Asleep in the Bathtub </a> Beyond warm, not quite simmering, shimmering anointing oil in the mecca of soothing comfort imperceptively rocked me down into its depths. Like being unborn again, this, still within a mother's giving fortress. Relaxed, untensed, unbent, the bla...

just got done w/the latest installment...now i have to read the whole thing from the beginning...

extra punctuation, rather than more exclaimation points, i'd say. yes. agreement. encouragement to write some more. yippee, ya-hoo, whoo-hoo. you know, along w/the spirit of the piece. take it as an add'l compliment. [img]images/smiles/icon_wink.gif[/img]

well, neither can i, so...."whenever"... geez, don't get all worked up about it! i was simply saying it was that goooood! HOOOOOOOOOOOWWL!!! [img]images/smiles/icon_eek.gif[/img]

it was a little bit of an effort to get into it, but once i did, it literally took off running. it's really intriguing. gimme more!