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don't know how i missed it the first time... when i got done reading i realized it was the first really 'fun' poem i've read in a while. made me feel pretty lighthearted. i'd probably even add 'zen' as a last word, as a comment. [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]

i'm glad you bounced it and i'll do it again... love this piece, gordy.

<a name="#thirty six"> Poems Never Written </a> The CPU is a footrest for feet whose owner is chained to her desk. She's posting four pages now; how many by next week? For now she relies on reserves from other days before an electronic succubus graced her living room. Occasionally inspiration takes ...

whoa... yep, we all have a tale to tell. i've seen some of yours, and its my hope that the world at large, the next generation, whoever can learn from people like us and stop the cycle. praise for you poem. [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]

no really, that was a great idea, rayven. i mean, when else do we dredge up so much utterly stinking, disgusting, rotten shit (except when we're alone) as we do in therapy? i used to try to deliberately shock my 'person.' it's really funny in retrospect. she was so utterly unflappable. hopefully you...

<a name="#thirty five"> Loft </a> Up four flights of stairs, around and around; one of these days I'll be able to run them unwinded. Newly arrived, I'll lug everything up there-- a few salvaged pieces of my past life-- and be glad to do so. I'm gonna live up there all alone for a good long while, pa...

<a name="#thirty four"> Somewhere </a> Somewhere tonight your computer screen looks you right in the eye. Somewhere else, right here in my own skin, I'm on this again, and again, and again. Never having seen in person-to-person, we've touched minds, in some way through keyboards & bullshit words, th...

gordy's genesis! it was great, gordy. just the right mix of spiritual, personal, humorous, and poetic license. [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img] i don't think it was too long at all...just right.

<a name="#thirty three"> Untitled </a> Yesterday, I sat down and said good-bye without a tear without a word like dust and bones and a well run dry. Sat down again later to make my peace but the words were transplanted so I was forced to listen while you corrected me, laid out the next stretch of ro...

here, here! i'm also an 'employed' and working mother, i have 2. this is just what it's like. thanks for posting it. really good! [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img] [img]images/smiles/icon_cool.gif[/img]

the ones (words) heinzs mentioned were deleted, the "c" words. otherwise, they stay. you write some pretty explicit stuff yourself; as you probably know sometimes there's no other way to say it. i've been through my thesarus w/this, and no doing... thx for the review thought, 'tis appreciated. [img]...

anyone wondering i'm on a huge ego trip, yeah, sure you betcah, but i had a request, also. this is probably one of my personal favorites, but it's b/c it's so close to my heart, or something.

per request... i think...

he might be right...

maybe this is more of a poem, but it was originally written in one long paragraph... enjoy, thief/terry, i don't know if anyone else did...?? [img]images/smiles/icon_confused.gif[/img] (hard to read, i know. just imagine a soundtrack playing in the background, that is what the words in quotation mar...