Poetry Pages

i think its about time i gave the awnser. i was comparing the difference between a mosquito and man. great guesses tho =]

thanks you, yes i agree, each peom can be interpreted by different readers but i meant for the others to guess and give their suggestions. =]

thanks again as all comments move me futher to produce more pieces.

very complex poem in my eys, this will take a while. i like poems with embedded meanings of which i gather this contains.

great work,i like the idea of being able to foresee the future as many wish this possible but all find eventually that despite their best efforts, it wont happen. the small spell error of been can be easily ignored. in whole, a good expressive poem with great themes and ideas.

thanks, ill attempt a re write to make it simpler and thank you for the critisism. ill be impressed if anyone can identify the two things i am comparing...

Two Opposite, Similar Creatures An innocent creature that flutters by, From the egg, to the wind, to the sky it rise, Its wings spread wide, it learns to fly, Its bad by man, but good in gods eyes. Each does what it can to survive, Both does for self, one does for greed, For both seek blood ere fals...

greeat, the fact that people do not recognise whats important and you would think they would recognise when so,mething/someones inportant but they soetimes dont, lastly the idea that life is death just not recognised as important. i have been described as a deep theorist or whatever they call it bec...

very nice, a while since ive read abit of you kamasui... i love thee fact that your mind was seduced by exahaustion. when u need to do something but dont want to the needy feeling "seduces" your state of mind until you eventuially commit the action. very nice, the concept of family and how this link...

again i read and again im amazed. very clear form of poetry and the content really depicts the feelings of a sengle persion, their state of mind and attitude toward the world. very nice =]

i loove the concept of this poem. most teenagers look for real friends that may not understand their "teenage blues" to make them feel better, however you choose the more childish approach and more realistic in a sense as the doll shares the same mind as you therefore you learn to understand yoursel...

can you prove this... if so send me a link to the poetry and the poet.

great work, im actually studying this as as i read i found many things to think about and the several outcomes possible. very intriguing when you think about it. well done, i will finish annotation sometime soon =]

really really nice words here, ignoring the fact you wrote this at 12 is quite worrying however, very good imagery inm this poem and im honoured to read something that has been so deeply respected and thought about...

thanks much of what i want already has come true, a great life, a promising future and an amazing girlfriend what more could i ask for mother than when i gget paranoid etc and gota write more poetry.