Search found 103 matches
- Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:56 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 10640
Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
i think its about time i gave the awnser. i was comparing the difference between a mosquito and man. great guesses tho =]
- Wed Dec 08, 2010 3:07 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 10640
Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
thanks you, yes i agree, each peom can be interpreted by different readers but i meant for the others to guess and give their suggestions. =]
- Thu Nov 25, 2010 3:08 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: A World Of...
- Replies: 4
- Views: 7238
Re: A World Of...
thanks again as all comments move me futher to produce more pieces.
- Thu Nov 25, 2010 3:08 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Fabricated Valor
- Replies: 1
- Views: 5167
Re: Fabricated Valor
very complex poem in my eys, this will take a while. i like poems with embedded meanings of which i gather this contains.
- Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:58 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Intentional Sacrifice
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3177
Re: Intentional Sacrifice
great work,i like the idea of being able to foresee the future as many wish this possible but all find eventually that despite their best efforts, it wont happen. the small spell error of been can be easily ignored. in whole, a good expressive poem with great themes and ideas.
- Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:36 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 10640
Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
thanks, ill attempt a re write to make it simpler and thank you for the critisism. ill be impressed if anyone can identify the two things i am comparing...
- Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:17 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 10640
Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
Two Opposite, Similar Creatures An innocent creature that flutters by, From the egg, to the wind, to the sky it rise, Its wings spread wide, it learns to fly, Its bad by man, but good in gods eyes. Each does what it can to survive, Both does for self, one does for greed, For both seek blood ere fals...
- Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:10 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: The Potency of Importance
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3981
Re: The Potency of Importance
greeat, the fact that people do not recognise whats important and you would think they would recognise when so,mething/someones inportant but they soetimes dont, lastly the idea that life is death just not recognised as important. i have been described as a deep theorist or whatever they call it bec...
- Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:07 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Lineage of Destruction
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3270
Re: Lineage of Destruction
very nice, a while since ive read abit of you kamasui... i love thee fact that your mind was seduced by exahaustion. when u need to do something but dont want to the needy feeling "seduces" your state of mind until you eventuially commit the action. very nice, the concept of family and how this link...
- Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:05 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Recently Single
- Replies: 9
- Views: 12143
Re: Recently Single
again i read and again im amazed. very clear form of poetry and the content really depicts the feelings of a sengle persion, their state of mind and attitude toward the world. very nice =]
- Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:02 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: A Lament for a Doll
- Replies: 7
- Views: 11184
Re: A Lament for a Doll
i loove the concept of this poem. most teenagers look for real friends that may not understand their "teenage blues" to make them feel better, however you choose the more childish approach and more realistic in a sense as the doll shares the same mind as you therefore you learn to understand yoursel...
- Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:00 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: My Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5116
Re: My Desire
can you prove this... if so send me a link to the poetry and the poet.
- Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:58 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: Eat Up
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3626
Re: Eat Up
great work, im actually studying this as as i read i found many things to think about and the several outcomes possible. very intriguing when you think about it. well done, i will finish annotation sometime soon =]
- Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:53 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: My Desire
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5116
Re: My Desire
really really nice words here, ignoring the fact you wrote this at 12 is quite worrying however, very good imagery inm this poem and im honoured to read something that has been so deeply respected and thought about...
- Wed Sep 15, 2010 6:18 am
- Forum: Teen Spirit
- Topic: ‘Nano-Souls’ in ‘Nano-Machines’
- Replies: 17
- Views: 11823
Re: ‘Nano-Souls’ in ‘Nano-Machines’
thanks much of what i want already has come true, a great life, a promising future and an amazing girlfriend what more could i ask for mother than when i gget paranoid etc and gota write more poetry.