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by xmartinx=]
Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:56 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
Replies: 7
Views: 3651

Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures

i think its about time i gave the awnser. i was comparing the difference between a mosquito and man. great guesses tho =]
by xmartinx=]
Wed Dec 08, 2010 3:07 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
Replies: 7
Views: 3651

Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures

thanks you, yes i agree, each peom can be interpreted by different readers but i meant for the others to guess and give their suggestions. =]
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 25, 2010 3:08 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: A World Of...
Replies: 4
Views: 2581

Re: A World Of...

thanks again as all comments move me futher to produce more pieces.
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 25, 2010 3:08 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Fabricated Valor
Replies: 1
Views: 1630

Re: Fabricated Valor

very complex poem in my eys, this will take a while. i like poems with embedded meanings of which i gather this contains.
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:58 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Intentional Sacrifice
Replies: 1
Views: 1236

Re: Intentional Sacrifice

great work,i like the idea of being able to foresee the future as many wish this possible but all find eventually that despite their best efforts, it wont happen. the small spell error of been can be easily ignored. in whole, a good expressive poem with great themes and ideas.
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:36 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
Replies: 7
Views: 3651

Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures

thanks, ill attempt a re write to make it simpler and thank you for the critisism. ill be impressed if anyone can identify the two things i am comparing...
by xmartinx=]
Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:17 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
Replies: 7
Views: 3651

Two Opposite, Similar Creatures

Two Opposite, Similar Creatures An innocent creature that flutters by, From the egg, to the wind, to the sky it rise, Its wings spread wide, it learns to fly, Its bad by man, but good in gods eyes. Each does what it can to survive, Both does for self, one does for greed, For both seek blood ere fals...
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:10 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: The Potency of Importance
Replies: 3
Views: 1406

Re: The Potency of Importance

greeat, the fact that people do not recognise whats important and you would think they would recognise when so,mething/someones inportant but they soetimes dont, lastly the idea that life is death just not recognised as important. i have been described as a deep theorist or whatever they call it bec...
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:07 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Lineage of Destruction
Replies: 1
Views: 1312

Re: Lineage of Destruction

very nice, a while since ive read abit of you kamasui... i love thee fact that your mind was seduced by exahaustion. when u need to do something but dont want to the needy feeling "seduces" your state of mind until you eventuially commit the action. very nice, the concept of family and how this link...
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:05 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Recently Single
Replies: 9
Views: 4069

Re: Recently Single

again i read and again im amazed. very clear form of poetry and the content really depicts the feelings of a sengle persion, their state of mind and attitude toward the world. very nice =]
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:02 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: A Lament for a Doll
Replies: 7
Views: 4080

Re: A Lament for a Doll

i loove the concept of this poem. most teenagers look for real friends that may not understand their "teenage blues" to make them feel better, however you choose the more childish approach and more realistic in a sense as the doll shares the same mind as you therefore you learn to understand yoursel...
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:00 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: My Desire
Replies: 6
Views: 1816

Re: My Desire

can you prove this... if so send me a link to the poetry and the poet.
by xmartinx=]
Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:58 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Eat Up
Replies: 2
Views: 1437

Re: Eat Up

great work, im actually studying this as as i read i found many things to think about and the several outcomes possible. very intriguing when you think about it. well done, i will finish annotation sometime soon =]
by xmartinx=]
Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:53 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: My Desire
Replies: 6
Views: 1816

Re: My Desire

really really nice words here, ignoring the fact you wrote this at 12 is quite worrying however, very good imagery inm this poem and im honoured to read something that has been so deeply respected and thought about...
by xmartinx=]
Wed Sep 15, 2010 6:18 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: ‘Nano-Souls’ in ‘Nano-Machines’
Replies: 17
Views: 4249

Re: ‘Nano-Souls’ in ‘Nano-Machines’

thanks much of what i want already has come true, a great life, a promising future and an amazing girlfriend what more could i ask for mother than when i gget paranoid etc and gota write more poetry.

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