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- Sat May 16, 2009 11:52 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Workshop: What makes it poetry?
- Replies: 20
- Views: 15395
Re: Workshop: What makes it poetry?
Many days of chasing my neighbor and friends FFA project steers, has taught me a thing or too about fenceposts. It is at the fencepost that you find the problem, and where you will innevitably have to fix it. The fence post, though small and seemingly fragile, is the strength of the system, that kee...
- Sat May 16, 2009 11:41 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Learn
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2112
Learn
Learn Progress is relative. To build cities is to build walls. The first step in renovation Is demolition. I’ve seen structures stand on crumbling foundations, Powerful nations, toppled, like Toddler’s block towers by Supposedly weaker factions, people Are unaware that what seem Like insignificant a...
- Sat May 16, 2009 11:40 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: The Coffee Girl Smiles
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2228
The Coffee Girl Smiles
The Coffee Girl Smiles The coffee girl smiles… My marrow aches My mind clicks and grinds Hands don’t regurgitate Stereotyped movement only I find they tick and wind Watches, the rain falls on Sodden streets, slick Oil floats and brakes shake And shudder at the thought Of locking in salient Promises ...
- Sat May 16, 2009 11:39 pm
- Forum: Funny Business
- Topic: My Heart
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3217
My Heart
My Heart Remember when we were walking, and We saw that young woman? I said she was pretty, but “Her skirt was too short” was your opinion. I told you that she looked like You will when you are grown. You said, “Nuh uh, Daddy” How can such a thing be known When you were just a baby, I worried a lot ...
- Sat May 16, 2009 11:28 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: A Place in Dreams
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3323
Re: A Place in Dreams
Thank you all for reading, and your comments!
- Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:14 pm
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: A Place in Dreams
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3323
A Place in Dreams
This is my first time posting in this forum... This one anchors my poetry CD, which has recently been finished. There is a Place in Dreams There is a place in dreams for living, and A place for leaving… There is a place in dreams for remembering, And a place for forgetting. There is a place for reme...
- Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:11 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: The Olive Tree
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1621
The Olive Tree
Olive Tree One kind word Melts the heart Fuses together the Broken pieces. Anger is fire All consuming Too hot to stand Next to without Getting burned. Olive branches On hot coals Reignite the tinder Box between Bitterness and heat. The flame dies Eventually, when The tree has no Branches left to bu...
- Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:06 pm
- Forum: Tom Watson's Whispers
- Topic: NIGHTTIME SOUNDS
- Replies: 7
- Views: 9838
Re: NIGHTTIME SOUNDS
Sometimes it's like that, I know...
- Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:03 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: What's The Use
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2399
Re: What's The Use
If only we could halt time...
- Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:00 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: History
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3126
Re: History
'You can always go home, you just can't stay" Black 47
- Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:58 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Cats...
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1762
Re: Cats...
Good point!
- Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:57 pm
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Bollywood Diva
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2360
Re: Bollywood Diva
Thank you!
- Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:45 am
- Forum: The New Members' Café
- Topic: Bollywood Diva
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2360
Bollywood Diva
Bollywood Diva You make a lovely poem. With your tresses of pure ebony That blanket of raven silk Flowing dark river Running into the delta of My desire’s contentment. Eyes, black as midnight, With a glimmer of stars, In desert skies, and Every bit as wide Stare straight through My soul, extract my ...
- Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:30 pm
- Forum: Love and Romance
- Topic: Quantum Love
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2576
Re: Quantum Love
Sometimes lovers can't be together in this dimension, and have to experience eachother through an alternate reality. Thanks for your comments!
- Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:40 am
- Forum: Form in Poetry, Classical and New
- Topic: The Flood (quasi- acrostic)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2610
The Flood (quasi- acrostic)
The Flood Katrina Your name is vilified By the real evil And the sheep wore The clothing of the wolf, For the media… For the government, to Scapegoat fear. The water rose, and People died. While Father was at work The house fell apart. Our F uture E xecuted for M yopic neo- con A genda, a F ailure t...