Poetry Pages

This is so touching. Id have a hard time saying anything that could improve it. Good luck in the chicken soup thingy. Not that i think you'll need it with a poem like this.

This... is damn good.

Not much more i could say to that

Another touching poem. Well written and put together as far as i can tell. I must confess it isn't the sort of poem i usually enjoy reading, but everybody has their own preference in poetry, and styles and ways of putting a poem together. I think the reason I'm not overly keen on this poem is becaus...

I found the poem rather touching, and yet also mildly chilling near the end. And i think that is a good thing, showing the reality that people face as loved ones head off and may never return. I found the poem easy to read as well. Sometimes poets overly complicate a poem when i need not be so (whic...

An ode to a hamster Oh an ode to a hamster Flying through the sky Doing kung fu and back flips To rainbows so high Oh an ode to a hamster Singing at the top of its voice Its little melodies Make little fishes weep and cry Oh an ode to a hamster For they dance a merry dance Lap dancers have nothing A...