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by Odd D
Sun Jan 22, 2012 12:13 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Abduction (Lyrical concept)
Replies: 1
Views: 273

Abduction (Lyrical concept)

Abduction (Lyrical concept) By Davin Casey Circulate, Circulate, All around, and encapsulate me. Penetrate, Elevate, Call me up, and Overwhelm me. You've already abducted the best of us all, Tainted him deep With malevolent flows. Just sitting and waiting and picking at the scabs Is tiring, Humilia...
by Odd D
Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:35 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Transfiguration.
Replies: 6
Views: 385

Re: Transfiguration.

Beautiful. Had to break from my silence to post about it. :mrgreen:
by Odd D
Wed Sep 28, 2011 11:16 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Lover
Replies: 2
Views: 406

Re: Lover

:bump:
by Odd D
Mon May 16, 2011 11:33 pm
Forum: Members' Poetry Vaults
Topic: Odd D
Replies: 3
Views: 2175

Re: Odd D

The Death and Birth of Mother Mirth, A Dragon's Tale The flighty romance of insomniac and dragon, rise and fall. Prayer Submerged below, you blend so well With deep blue seas, and reds of hell. Remarkable, isn't she, The Sapphire Queen? Truth be told, only time will tell. The image of your beauty F...
by Odd D
Tue Apr 12, 2011 12:29 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Lover
Replies: 2
Views: 406

Lover

Lover By Davin Casey Lover, You’ve created a monster. Friction left you so lackluster. Tears and blood had fed your children. All the sin within your temple Made it look like you were guilty. Cables bare against the ocean, Tortured by the ceaseless waves, All you needed were disciples; Just a dozen...
by Odd D
Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:48 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Don't have to Bleed
Replies: 10
Views: 722

Re: Don't have to Bleed

Ah, ha ha, yes... All fair enough explanation to me. Go on with your methods, you loon. :bow:

Side Note: I <3 semi-colons.
by Odd D
Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:11 am
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Don't have to Bleed
Replies: 10
Views: 722

Re: Don't have to Bleed

I, like Mr. H, have noticed your use of commas and "..." and such in several poems of yours as well. While by no means do I think there is any crazy rule regarding this, I would perhaps like to share my opinion, if you don't mind... It looks a mite sloppy.The commas ( and "..." and whatnot, you know...
by Odd D
Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:53 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Window Slams Shut
Replies: 6
Views: 612

Re: The Window Slams Shut

Just Me wrote:Flows beautifully :mrgreen:
It does? Well fabulous!

Ha ha, I didn't really mean for it to, but it's great that it turned out that way. Thanks for the comment. :thumbsup:
by Odd D
Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:30 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Window Slams Shut
Replies: 6
Views: 612

Re: The Window Slams Shut

I'm in awe! That flows so wonderfully as i'm listening to just you and me by chicago in my headphones! I just noticed who you are. Heh, Awe, eh? Well that's perfectly fine with me. Sadly, I don't know the track! Ha ha, So I'm afraid to say the poem wasn't meant to sync with it in anyway. Glad you g...
by Odd D
Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:22 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Window Slams Shut
Replies: 6
Views: 612

Re: The Window Slams Shut

moonflower wrote:i read this twice and loved it both times..it held me captured from beginning to end! :grin:
Fabulous! I'm happy to hear that it warranted being read twice.
Thank you much for the comment, Moonflower. :D
by Odd D
Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:49 am
Forum: Poeticpiers Master of Form
Topic: Lady in waiting.
Replies: 4
Views: 1028

Re: Lady in waiting.

The most important part of a poem, in my opinion, is the final line.

And you NAILED it with this poem! Chilling, depressing, exciting... Ha ha, It was excellent all around, though! Thank you for sharing. :thumbsup:
by Odd D
Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:37 am
Forum: Community Favorites, Poem of the Week and Poet of the Month
Topic: March 2011 Poet of the Month ~ bags123
Replies: 7
Views: 1929

Re: March 2011 Poet of the Month ~ bags123

Congratulations, sir bags! You're certainly most deserving.

If anyone wants to dispute this, I challenge them to an e-spar. My representative in the spar shall be... Bags. :)

But seriously. Congrats and junk. :D
by Odd D
Sat Feb 26, 2011 2:44 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Window Slams Shut
Replies: 6
Views: 612

The Window Slams Shut

The Window Slams Shut By Davin Casey Here, Lost in your vision, I’ve found Solace in the clutches of a beast, Where I’ll discover myself. A murging of the conscience and the soul, One becomes whole, All becomes new. But passion survives in every hue. In a blink, Momentarily eternal, You were naked ...
by Odd D
Tue Jan 18, 2011 12:18 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Refreshing Pools
Replies: 0
Views: 241

Refreshing Pools

Refreshing Pools By Davin Casey Refreshing pools, Twins upon this magnificent glen - Inside of these, I have seen unexposed compassion. Beautiful gold, The light inside rejuvenates me. Wakening cold, Their waters break the mundane cycle. A nurturing Spirit bathes within their mirrored face. Her lul...
by Odd D
Fri Jan 14, 2011 11:21 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures
Replies: 7
Views: 1966

Re: Two Opposite, Similar Creatures

I envision a bat as one of the creatures. At first I was thinking bat and bird, but I'm doubting myself very seriously on that now. Now I'm thinking spider and... Meh, I dunno. :shrug: Ha ha I do have to agree with Mr. H here in that I find a few parts a spot choppy. Particularly the beginning, when...

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