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by Crooklyn
Wed Jul 10, 2013 1:17 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Manic Repressive
Replies: 1
Views: 926

Manic Repressive

Manic Repressive Tonight she is silent, she won't say a word. Last night she flitted, and sang like a bird. Tonight she's tired, she says with a frown. Last night she turned my world upside down. She said she was sorry in the text that she sent. But now that she's here, she will not repent, nor eve...
by Crooklyn
Fri Feb 08, 2013 8:28 pm
Forum: The New Members' Café
Topic: Chicken Bones and Condoms
Replies: 1
Views: 1766

Chicken Bones and Condoms

It's a blizzard in New York
Now East Harlem is clean
We are covered in snow
even in the places
you shouldn't go

chicken bones and condoms
all covered in snow
Forgotten for a day
tomorrow the snow
will melt away

These moments
These moments will never stay
every good moment goes away.
by Crooklyn
Sun Sep 16, 2012 2:39 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: She calls me Verrazano
Replies: 10
Views: 3553

Re: She calls me Verrazano

Thanks so much man for the response. The Verrazano bridge is a HUGE bridge in NY, it was the longest bridge in the world for many years.
by Crooklyn
Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:40 pm
Forum: In Tribute
Topic: Airmail from the WTC
Replies: 5
Views: 2799

Re: Airmail from the WTC

Never forget.
by Crooklyn
Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:35 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: She calls me Verrazano
Replies: 10
Views: 3553

Re: She calls me Verrazano

I'd still really appreciate some constructive criticism.
by Crooklyn
Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:33 pm
Forum: Love and Romance
Topic: Remainder
Replies: 6
Views: 1657

Re: Remainder

Exactly.
by Crooklyn
Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:32 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Gnomosexuality
Replies: 18
Views: 2569

Re: Gnomosexuality

Thank you!
by Crooklyn
Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:31 pm
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: Too Much?
Replies: 2
Views: 1408

Re: Too Much?

Thank you!
by Crooklyn
Sun Jan 22, 2012 10:53 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Gnomosexuality
Replies: 18
Views: 2569

Re: Gnomosexuality

I'd love it if more people read this and let me know what they thought about it.
by Crooklyn
Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:03 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Gnomosexuality
Replies: 18
Views: 2569

Re: Gnomosexuality

Wow, it's been a couple of years since I've looked-up my old work. This is probably the best thing I've ever written. :hearts:
by Crooklyn
Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:30 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: There ought to be!!
Replies: 2
Views: 498

Re: There ought to be!!

I remember the days here in the US when the sidewalks didn't even have the depressions at the corners to allow wheelchair users to cross the street! Things have improved, but only slightly. We need to accomodate ALL our citizens!
by Crooklyn
Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:26 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Prophets and Comedians
Replies: 5
Views: 744

Re: Prophets and Comedians

I really enjoyed this. it made me think of George Carlin, who in my opinion was both a prophet and a comedian.
by Crooklyn
Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:24 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Book Burning
Replies: 3
Views: 576

Re: Book Burning

Piers, I couldn't agree more. I keep wondering... when will we learn our lesson??
by Crooklyn
Wed Sep 15, 2010 1:17 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The Numbers Never Lie
Replies: 9
Views: 856

Re: The Numbers Never Lie

LOL dude, I like, totally, get what you're saying here! In fact I just had the most awesome idea that.... wait... I forgot. :cheers:
by Crooklyn
Wed Sep 15, 2010 12:23 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Book Burning
Replies: 3
Views: 576

Book Burning

They did this to us He said She said Them and their damned book Look! The pain they caused The lives they took He said She said See! It's black and white A book of blood Hate and spite Ignite! Burn it! Burn the page! Rid us of this blight! Unite! Patriots good Countrymen right! Burn it! For we hold...

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