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by Altawell
Wed Apr 11, 2012 7:51 am
Forum: Seeking the Spiritual
Topic: Something About ‘Palestine’!
Replies: 1
Views: 556

Something About ‘Palestine’!

**** *** * In Palestine The dying clouds Hastily changing Hastily moving And Westerly bound In Palestine A blue horizon Is rapidly forming Creating Unstoppable Middle Eastern Tide In Palestine The message of love Has been Polluted Loving other than Your own Has no place In the heart Nor in the mind...
by Altawell
Wed Apr 11, 2012 7:46 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Temporary Worlds
Replies: 1
Views: 236

Temporary Worlds

**** *** * As a result of A passing thought From misinterpreted Source Temporary worlds ‘Form’ ‘Exist’ Not knowing Those ‘humans’ In their Duality place The actual formation Of their so called ‘Universes’ and Their own individual ‘Worlds’ Momentarily ‘Worlds’ Momentarily ‘Universes’ So solid So the...
by Altawell
Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:56 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Unsettled Nature God
Replies: 4
Views: 447

Re: Unsettled Nature God

FirestoneFeinberg wrote:I'm very dense when it comes to understanding abstract poetry, but I know what i like -- and I like this. It works. Well. --David

Hi,

Good to hear from you!

Glad to know that you like the poem :hello:
by Altawell
Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:03 pm
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Unsettled Nature God
Replies: 4
Views: 447

Re: Unsettled Nature God

poeticpiers reborn wrote:Some of the lesser Gods linger still in quiet forest groves.

Yes, this is true :grin:

Good to hear from you :bow:
by Altawell
Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:53 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Unsettled Nature God
Replies: 4
Views: 447

Unsettled Nature God

**** *** ** The snow The silence And The sleeping cat Everything seems Peaceful Settled Under a faint Light Shivering gently From An old oil lamp While the cracking Noise From a distant Burning point Is nothing but A coded sound taps Sourced from Within Unsettled nature God Sustaining the fire Cour...
by Altawell
Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:44 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The 'Arab Spring'
Replies: 4
Views: 527

Re: The 'Arab Spring'

heinzs wrote:But probably not in our lifetimes...
Well, if we do not change how we treat each other, then there is such a 'possibility'!

Thank you for your message.
by Altawell
Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:41 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The 'Arab Spring'
Replies: 4
Views: 527

Re: The 'Arab Spring'

poeticpiers reborn wrote:Eventually mankind will mature and find a better way or face extinction

That is true - however, the first option should be the 'aim' for all of us!

Thank you for your message.
by Altawell
Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:36 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Questions From A Truth Seeker
Replies: 4
Views: 2105

Re: Questions From A Truth Seeker

ShadowLover wrote:i love the way you structered the poem and it has a very good point to it! well done :thumbsup:

Thank you for your message and for your kind words.
by Altawell
Thu Jan 12, 2012 11:08 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Anonymous Voices
Replies: 2
Views: 1154

Anonymous Voices

**** ** * The truth from a Child Watching intently Unknown observer Where Death in the valley And Laughter from A ‘Drunken’ soldier ‘Be killed Or Surrender’ Voices Vibrate in anger While the silence Of weakness Chock every soul In every Corner Forgotten lines Forgotten lives Poverty without Richnes...
by Altawell
Thu Jan 05, 2012 8:49 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: The 'Arab Spring'
Replies: 4
Views: 527

The 'Arab Spring'

***** *** * They say ‘Harmony’ in the ‘world’ ‘Peace’ among ‘men’ And ‘love’ is The ‘Answer’ But Dear brother All we hear is The stories of ‘killing’ The firing of Bullets And The deployment of Heavy guns * * * * * * * Time and time The fighting erupt In every ‘front’ And the worst of Today’s killi...
by Altawell
Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:45 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Yellow Fields
Replies: 4
Views: 1453

Re: Yellow Fields

Hi and thank you for your comments.

The poem is a reflection of the continous process taking place within and without!

In ancient time 'Yellow Fields' prophecy mentioned and talked about before major changes to the world took place at that time!

Thank you again :hello:
by Altawell
Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:25 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Yellow Fields
Replies: 4
Views: 1453

Re: Yellow Fields

Hi,

Thank you for your comments
Glad to know that you like the poem. :bow:
by Altawell
Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:42 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Questions From A Truth Seeker
Replies: 4
Views: 2105

Questions From A Truth Seeker

* * * * * * * * Why I am here in this world? Why those who loved and Scarified most Here and there Are Neglected Or Prosecuted Or Imprisoned Or Even Killed Just because they Tried to help this world? No one told me No one guided me No one explained The absolute Truth Apart from Their manmade religi...
by Altawell
Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:40 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Yellow Fields
Replies: 4
Views: 1453

Yellow Fields

* * * * * * * * In a place where The East meets the West And the North meets the South Where the end of polarities And the birth of singularity Where a ‘human mind’ View ‘thyself’ history Nothing but the beginning Of the ending Of A Personality Disintegrating, disappearing No difference than the de...
by Altawell
Wed May 25, 2011 9:40 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: The Traveller And The Forgotten Delhi Dream
Replies: 4
Views: 1521

Re: The Traveller And The Forgotten Delhi Dream

bags123 wrote::thumbsup:

Thanks :grin:

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