Poetry Pages

Yeh! Writing bad poetry is like destroying a monitor with an hammer, which is equally not easy

A creative writer

A status, he forms
from a naked situation.
Puts unto it life.
Controls its movements,
actions and deeds;
then, kills it
if he so desires.

Love this style, it's more of haiku. If it is, then it is indeed a 7 year plan for you have gone far.
Well done.

Nice write, but sad. One good privilege is that you are able to put it down in the books of history and even share it with those with similar problems. Not many people are this lucky.

That must be a beutiful place, you said it so well.

I'm also waiting for that winds of inspiration Gordy.
Your poem flows nicely

Jadynara, i think you are right. One could deduce from the last stanza that the poet is referring to oneself. You know we are the greatest enemies of ourselves.

This is beautiful, nice imagery, sweet flow but sad.
Sweet memories are very helpful in healing the wounds of the heart.

Well one.

I think this is poetic