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by heartstrong
Tue Mar 04, 2008 2:12 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Change in Time
Replies: 8
Views: 2864

Re: Change in Time

Loved it, especially the last stanza. Well written, great tempo. If I may add a tiny suggestion . . . wouldn't you rather say "too late" instead of "to late"? :grin:
by heartstrong
Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:23 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Pieces of a soul
Replies: 12
Views: 3405

Re: Pieces of a soul

Aw, thanks so much. :hearts:
Wow, this thing is ancient. Feels like I wrote it in another lifetime. Maybe I did. :grin:
by heartstrong
Tue Jan 29, 2008 1:04 pm
Forum: Prose, Stories, Roleplays, Story Poems and Epics
Topic: Words Missing Can Hurt More Than Words Said
Replies: 0
Views: 831

Words Missing Can Hurt More Than Words Said

Another dreary Tuesday morning, and she wishes she was somewhere else, somewhere very far away. Images of home, of another country, pass through her thoughts but vanish before they can depress her. She doesn’t like it here, and she considers January to be the ‘depressing’ month of the year. Not for ...
by heartstrong
Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:11 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: just so you know
Replies: 14
Views: 2432

Re: just so you know

Exactly what I was thinking.

Maybe reality is a mash-up of the dreams and nightmares of all people. We all end up contributing, in the end.

Excellent write :thumbsup:
by heartstrong
Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:47 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: **found**
Replies: 236
Views: 52808

Re: **found**

Found
Inside of hopeless tears
Darkness like oxygen feeding the fire
Determination
by heartstrong
Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:45 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: all positive or real.
Replies: 3
Views: 977

Re: all positive or real.

C'est la vie

Muchly enjoyed :thumbsup:
by heartstrong
Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:43 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Words Unspoken
Replies: 6
Views: 2226

Re: Words Unspoken

Beautifully written. :thumbsup:
by heartstrong
Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:40 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Words
Replies: 7
Views: 1459

Re: Words

But most people don't listen, so sometimes you have to scream a little. :grin:
by heartstrong
Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:51 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Words
Replies: 7
Views: 1459

Re: Words

Thank you! :hello:

I wish I could say more than just 'thank you' but I can't think of anything. :]
by heartstrong
Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:53 pm
Forum: Important Information
Topic: Happy Belated Birthday PoetryPages.com!
Replies: 26
Views: 26289

Re: Happy Belated Birthday PoetryPages.com!

:bow: :thewave: happy happy birthday happy happy birthday :thewave:
by heartstrong
Wed Jan 09, 2008 3:02 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Words
Replies: 7
Views: 1459

Re: Words

:grin: thank you
by heartstrong
Sat Jan 05, 2008 5:16 pm
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Words
Replies: 7
Views: 1459

Words

Speak words unspoken
To undo your absences
And maybe they’ll hear
by heartstrong
Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:27 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Goodbye
Replies: 2
Views: 1423

Re: Goodbye

:grin:
It was a pleasure to write.
I'm a little short on words now, and I wish I could say more.
But thank you for the kind comment. :grin:
by heartstrong
Fri Nov 09, 2007 3:25 pm
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Goodbye
Replies: 2
Views: 1423

Goodbye

Regret Murmur it’s not right You can’t stand the thought of being alone Yet you wait to leave To destroy the chance Of hurting me Because you can’t stand to hurt me Why Why are you running? Where Where do you think you’ll find your peace? Save your soul the agony Because there’s nothing more to live...
by heartstrong
Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:11 am
Forum: Teen Spirit
Topic: Procrastination
Replies: 8
Views: 2134

I can relate. lol.
I'd say more in this comment, but I don't feel like it right now. Maybe I'll post again later. After all, my nails aren't pink enough. Where's that nail polish. . . . . :mrgreen:

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