Search found 142 matches
- Sat Apr 18, 2009 7:02 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Drill
- Replies: 18
- Views: 14057
Re:
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- Fri Apr 10, 2009 4:22 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: the dark night
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4783
Re: the dark night
tell me N asks for information
of the dark night about night,
of the dark night about night,
- Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:07 am
- Forum: Funny Business
- Topic: Scientists discover new element
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5035
Re: Scientists discover new element
UH, I thought it was an article abut admins there for a momeent, and then I pulled myself together.
- Thu Apr 09, 2009 10:49 am
- Forum: Funny Business
- Topic: Buff
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3628
Buff
Some people when they dream
- Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:40 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Bou
- Replies: 5
- Views: 5116
Re: Boudicca
Hehe, you spoil me Tony Fiona, but I like it.
regards
Snorple
regards
Snorple
- Sat Jan 24, 2009 3:27 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Deat
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4105
Re: Death Stalks Love - reconstituted as a Villanelle
Thanks Heienzes, I think you are the only one who reads my posts, I wonder why?
- Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:46 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Bou
- Replies: 5
- Views: 5116
Re: Boudicca
I tried to make a pantoum
- Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:36 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Bou
- Replies: 5
- Views: 5116
Bou
Boudicca
- Tue Jan 20, 2009 9:56 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Deat
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4105
Deat
For
- Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:50 am
- Forum: General Poetry
- Topic: Time
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7291
Re: Time Brought Memories
Thanks
- Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:35 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Boy Soldiers
- Replies: 8
- Views: 7711
Re: Boy Soldiers
There they stood, with a confident gait. The uniforms crisp and clean, the swastika gleaming. Standing at attention, they face their king. These are not men, but merely boys. Boys that were groomed at their birth, to become perfect little soldiers. Taught to be cruel and treat everyone differently....
- Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:12 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: To "M"
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4121
Re: To "M"
Sometimes I have nothing to say instead the words, just a silent sight [suggest: instead of words, sincere sighs] you do mean sighs and not sight? sometimes it´s the laugh, the smile your charm, doing something inside. I find the phrasing somewhat akward and although I sense the direction of this po...
- Tue Nov 11, 2008 2:54 am
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: November
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4628
Re: November
I hadn't even notied it was about 'unwanted flowers' until Heinzs mentioned it in his post. I started out looking for weaknesses in the poem itself but then as I read I recognised the scences so familiar to me. I became engrossed and enjoyed the seasons and the effort and love one feels for ones gar...
- Mon Nov 10, 2008 1:15 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Bipo
- Replies: 14
- Views: 10134
Re: Bipolar Blues
Ah, thanks you Heinzs, now I have read another poem.