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by snorple
Sat Apr 18, 2009 7:02 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Drill
Replies: 18
Views: 5525

Re:

[quote="Reverse Sminkie"]i'd like
by snorple
Fri Apr 10, 2009 4:22 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: the dark night
Replies: 4
Views: 1811

Re: the dark night

tell me N asks for information
of the dark night about night,
by snorple
Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:07 am
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: Scientists discover new element
Replies: 7
Views: 1579

Re: Scientists discover new element

UH, I thought it was an article abut admins there for a momeent, and then I pulled myself together.
by snorple
Thu Apr 09, 2009 10:49 am
Forum: Funny Business
Topic: Buff
Replies: 4
Views: 1001

Buff

Some people when they dream
by snorple
Tue Feb 17, 2009 4:46 am
Forum: Briefs:
Topic: Ind
Replies: 1
Views: 479

Ind

A valley
by snorple
Sun Feb 01, 2009 4:40 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Bou
Replies: 5
Views: 1399

Re: Boudicca

Hehe, you spoil me Tony Fiona, but I like it.

regards

Snorple
by snorple
Sat Jan 24, 2009 3:27 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Deat
Replies: 3
Views: 1377

Re: Death Stalks Love - reconstituted as a Villanelle

Thanks Heienzes, I think you are the only one who reads my posts, I wonder why?

:soapbox:
by snorple
Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:46 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Bou
Replies: 5
Views: 1399

Re: Boudicca

I tried to make a pantoum
by snorple
Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:36 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Bou
Replies: 5
Views: 1399

Bou

Boudicca
by snorple
Tue Jan 20, 2009 9:56 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Deat
Replies: 3
Views: 1377

Deat

For
by snorple
Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:50 am
Forum: General Poetry
Topic: Time
Replies: 10
Views: 2154

Re: Time Brought Memories

Thanks
by snorple
Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:35 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Boy Soldiers
Replies: 8
Views: 2589

Re: Boy Soldiers

There they stood, with a confident gait. The uniforms crisp and clean, the swastika gleaming. Standing at attention, they face their king. These are not men, but merely boys. Boys that were groomed at their birth, to become perfect little soldiers. Taught to be cruel and treat everyone differently....
by snorple
Fri Nov 21, 2008 2:12 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: To "M"
Replies: 3
Views: 1346

Re: To "M"

Sometimes I have nothing to say instead the words, just a silent sight [suggest: instead of words, sincere sighs] you do mean sighs and not sight? sometimes it´s the laugh, the smile your charm, doing something inside. I find the phrasing somewhat akward and although I sense the direction of this po...
by snorple
Tue Nov 11, 2008 2:54 am
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: November
Replies: 4
Views: 1513

Re: November

I hadn't even notied it was about 'unwanted flowers' until Heinzs mentioned it in his post. I started out looking for weaknesses in the poem itself but then as I read I recognised the scences so familiar to me. I became engrossed and enjoyed the seasons and the effort and love one feels for ones gar...
by snorple
Mon Nov 10, 2008 1:15 pm
Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
Topic: Bipo
Replies: 14
Views: 3632

Re: Bipolar Blues

Ah, thanks you Heinzs, now I have read another poem.

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