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- Mon Feb 11, 2008 1:59 pm
- Forum: Workshop/Critiques Wanted
- Topic: Short Journeys
- Replies: 5
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It is a bit disjointing. As I was reading it I was confused for a moment at the middle, thinking I'd missed something but I hadn't. It's hard to place a time and location but I think I have it figured out. I like the words and lines but I feel like I prefer the beginning and the end over the middle....