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Yes I remember reading this poem.. To me this poem brings hope and it makes me realize that we imperfect human beings cam still have a connection with our creator.

Hi tom... nice poem.. Your an artist for your word. Its been awhile since I drop by to say nice work.

Enrique izazaga

I look up some of my work. And I found that this one needed some editing. I took the liberty to make corrections. Night Sky Many swirling galaxies the cold eyes of the universe look upon all living things without emotion... images in dark surrouding areas painting unique forms of unknowns --without ...

Moments of inspiration Feeble lights faded into the nothingness The paint wears out like a painted picture in sunlight... Moments of inspiration pondering in persistant thoughts your warm smile comforts me envisioning this blind passion... This ochone soul hides in eternal silence a bleak existence...

The next morning my stomach felt empty from not eating and it made a loud roar. I went into one of the destroyed houses and there I saw some bread lying on a small table. I immediately snatched up the bread and began to eat it. Slowly I regained my memory, I can only recall one part. The battle... I...

So I was thinking maby we all can start a story and see where it ends... The story am talking about is where one member start with something and any member can continue. The story could be halirious or anything, you can also change the setting, add more character, ect....I'll start... It was a cold ...

In spring, it is the morning whispers of the birds that are most beautiful. Their echo carries in the woods, bringing life to mothernature. Anew life starts with a small seed of hope. In summer, the vastness of the afternoon skies, the wonders of it all, tweek the brain in a moment of silence. The l...

I don't have any suggestion for this poem... the way I read it sounded perfectly fine.... this poem has that certain "touch" in a nice caring way. Bueno Heinzs!!

gordy wrote:im sorry, i thought it might not be enuff..........

Naturally

TOO MUCH FOR ME

for some reason i think you picked the perfect words for this poem....nice write gordy...

Naturally

Hey their friendforever i really like the way you changed things around....your words are like a singing siren.....

Woow Debbie that was fantastic.....somehow i feel unloved...but i don't have nobody to blame but myself...while reading this beautiful poem the image drawed me in.....and i must agree with Haroo, broken wings has a beautiful face upon the pages. There is so much wonder hidden within each of your smi...